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take out the uhs and ahs for sure. Also, spoken language is often not grammatical and there would be no problem with making things more readable. Also, the personal remarks at the beginning of a service can be cut (no need for the reader to know about your church picnic next thursday at 3pm, bring the potato salad, etc). Also, putting sub-headings in bold print helps.
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"If a commission by an earthly king is considered a honor, how can a commission by a Heavenly King be considered a sacrifice?"
-- David Livingstone
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