I've been reading up on some theology of late, and so I've been writing a piece myself in order to help to consolidate my understanding of some things. Out of four sections I plan to write, this is the first, and it's divided into six chapters, coming to a total of around 13,500 words. If anyone could read this and give some feedback to see if I am on the right lines, that would be great.

EDIT: Removed for the meantime..

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John (yeah it's my RL first name as well as the guy I chose my username from)
Church of Scotland
Scotland

WOW!!

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Bob, elder, RBC Louisville. 1689 LBCF

"... Of such also, or of those who make a credible profession of being such, all those particular churches consist, which constitute our Lord's visible kingdom. ... Consequently, all the subjects of His government must have spiritual dispositions, , and yield spiritual obedience- obedience proceeding from an enlightened understanding, an awakened conscience, and a renewed heart."- Abraham Booth 1788

Any more comments? Please, I would really like some feedback...