A Haiku is a Japanese poem composed of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables.
I like the idea, Chuck, but the last line is problematic to me. It sounds like you're using a euphemism for the 'f' word. (No offense intended, brother, but that's what it sounds like to me.)
Otherwise, I can relate very much to the point of the poem, which is to acknowledge God's sovereignty over disasters and personal travails.
Keep workin' on it! My
[Edited on 18-1-2005 by VirginiaHuguenot]
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