Okay, I redid the song and made several changes. The Chord progression is pretty much the same. However, I:

1. Changed it to the key of F#/Gb, because it was much more comfortable for my vocal range.

2. I put some backup vox in it for harmony.

3. Mastered 2 different versions. One has an extra guitar starting 3rd verse, and drums, the other is simple guitar and 2 vox.

Tell me what you think:

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