Good job, Josh! I'm impressed, not only with the lyrics, but also the melody! I also play guitar, and write songs as well. And, your vocals are of more appeal than mine in several ways. After listening to your cut, I think our styles somewhat mesh. I broke out my guitar and listened while I played along with you. I have a couple of minor suggestions to offer, but I would only want you to take them in the light of one musician to another, and in view of what I personally tended to do with the song as I played along with you. I guess everyone gravitates to their own ways. Anyway, I'll get back to you. I found that you were D up 3.

Blessings and keep up the good work!

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Charles Plauger
Member/Grace Reformed Church
Oakland, MD